He bewailed of not finding love.
All the while, love danced before him.
Alas, he was blind.
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He bewailed of not finding love.
All the while, love danced before him.
Alas, he was blind.
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Beautiful, Mia! Well done.
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Glad you found it so. Thank you so much for appreciating, Jake. 🙂
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💗💗
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Thanks, Christine! 🙂
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Great post Mia 👏 Have a great day 🙏
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Thank you so much for your encouragement, Chris! 🙂
You have a great day too.
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Thank you Mia 👍
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Poor blind man. Maybe he shouldn’t have gone to a pole dance club 😁🥸🙃
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Apparently it wasn’t his choice to be born into that club called life. 🤷🏻♀️
Thanks a lot for stopping by to comment, Poetpas. 🙂
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Who knows heh. Good poetry!!
You’re very welcome 🌷
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It’s a short story, but thanks anyway.
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a very well constructed micro-story with an open ending. My hug, Mia.
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I really like how you see it as an open ending. Now that’s optimism! 🙌🏻
Thank you so much for your support, Fernando. 🤗
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I like the story within a story here. Lots of interesting options!
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Glad to know. Thank you so much for your appreciation, J! 🙂
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I see myself in this Mia, there are so many different types of love that we shut our eyes to because it doesn’t fit our vision or ideal. I plan on opening them, thanks for this beautiful inspiration!
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Aww! It makes me soooo happy to read that my tiny tale inspired you to open yourself up for more happiness, Martina! You made my day, so thank you!! 🤗
I wish you the very best. 💖
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Simply wonderful!
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Luisa! 🙂
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You’re most welcome ❣️❣️❣️
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Love is blind lol 😂
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This level of blindness is a problem, though! 😅
Thanks a lot for commenting, Yassy! 🙂
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Wonderful post 🌹
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Thanks a ton for appreciating, Satyam! 🙂
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Absolutely beautiful
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Thanks a ton for letting me know, Lynn! 🙂
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♥️♥️♥️
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Thanks a lot, Martha! 🙂
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Good poem!
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Thanks a ton, Wilson for appreciating! 🙂
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