When the heart skips a beat
At just someone’s presence,
When time stops for us
Chilling us to our bones,
All we can do
Is love.
When eyes smile
More than the lips,
When the heart hears
More than the ears,
All we can do
Is love.
When someone else’s pain
Hurts more than our own,
When someone else’s joy
Can drain away our sorrow,
All we can do
Is love.
When we don’t know
What else to do,
When we have no clue
How to make things better,
All we can do
Is love.
When even love
Is not enough,
When even love
Stifles the other,
All we can do
Is let go.
True that is. Lovely 👏
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Thank you so much, Kritika! 🙂🙂
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Living for the other person. This was lovely
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Thank you so much for your kind words! 😊
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This is so touching, kind and true. Thank you Mia. Have a very blessed day. Love 💕 Joni
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Thank you so much for showering such kind praise on my work, Joni! 😊
May you too have a very blessed day!
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Beautifully penned.
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Rupal! 🙂
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“When eyes smile
More than the lips,”
Beautiful, Mia. Just..wow!
Of course, the final lines contain a sobering counterpoint to the lofty spell that proceeded it, but we all have been there at times, haven’t we?
Even if we’ve been there 1,001 times, though, all it takes is one triumph to vault us past all the regret. Indeed, your poem get the proportion just about right, with joyous reverie outpacing sorrow by five-to-one.
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Thank you so much for being for so kind to me, Keith. 🙂 I really look forward to your inputs.
Yes, the ending is in contrast to the rest of the poem above it. But isn’t life also like that at times?
Also, no matter how many butterflies in the stomach some instances brought to one, sometimes one has to let them go, so that they can find something that lasts. 🙂
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Wow! This is a very beautiful piece, Mia! I especially love the change of tone in the last paragraph. One of my favorite pieces, so far!
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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sombre and honest, beautifully written Mia
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Jude! 🙂🙂
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Pleasure
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Absolutely beautiful with a heartfelt meaning. So emotional and elegant.
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Thank you so much for showering such beautiful praise on me, Lucy! 🙂🙂
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Reblogged this on The sense.
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Thank you so much, dear for the reblog! 🙂
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A wonderful poem for love Mia. Love changes our view on life. We learn, there is more than us.
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You are right, John. Thank you so much for your kind words. 🙂
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You are welcome dear Mia.
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