I knew you were the doom
That was to befall me,
The moment I saw you,
The moment I fell in love,
Yes, I was doomed.
I knew only destruction
Could come out of ‘us’
But I could not help it,
But I still wanted to live it.
Yes, I was doomed.
I knew we would hurt
More than we could heal
That which was inside us both,
That we had built around us.
Yes, I was doomed.
Then why could I not stop
Myself and you
From what could be easily avoided,
From being foolish.
Yes, I was doomed.
Why choose fire
When water was at hand,
To be safe and secure,
To keep going smoothly?
Yes, I was doomed.
Doomed to meet you,
Doomed to fall for you,
Doomed to fail at it,
Doomed to fall apart.
Yes, I was doomed.
But if I had the chance,
I would do it all again,
Because you were my fate,
Because you were my choice.
Yes, I was doomed.
Delicious.
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Thank you so much, Rushmore. π
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Iβm ever so sorry π
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Hahaha! Well…
Good that the poem is only a product of my imagination, else I wouldn’t have been able to laugh with you on this. π
Thank you so much for stopping by to comment, Jerry.
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Just a bit of good fun π Glad you picked up on that! And youβre very welcome βΊοΈ
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I guess that most of us have similar experiences. Very nicely written
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I’m glad that you could connect to it, David. Thank you so much for your appreciation. π
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You are welcome I always appreciate your work but I am terrible at commenting regulalrly
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I’m am satisfied and happy about whatever time you bestow on my writing, David. So really, it’s okay. And thanks again! π
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Love this Mia! So well pennedπ I think we all know this story … β€οΈ
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Humbled to see your heartfelt response, Cindy! Thank you so much for being so kind. π
Also, I’m glad you found the poem close to reality.
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It’s a pleasure, truly. πβ€οΈπ
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Thanks a lot, Christine! π
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interesting dichotomy, fate and choice
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Thank you so much for appreciating, Fred! π
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Excellent piece of writing βοΈ π
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Thank you so much for supporting, Mash! π
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Feels like you wrote this for me. Good read!
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Haha! Good to know you could connect to it, Noah! Thank you so much for appreciating. π
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It was inevitable.
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Haha! Yeah, it was. Thanks a lot for stopping by to comment, Dawn. π
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Very nice
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Thanks a lot for your appreciation, Jaimy! π
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NICE POST ππ·
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Thank you so much for your appreciation! π
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