Let me ask you,
If I may,
If you can take it,
What are you made of?
Not the scientific answer,
Not the philosophic dream,
But at your very core,
What are you made of?
Not what Mommy said,
Not what Daddy trained,
But what was always there,
What are you made of?
Not who circumstances molded,
Not who people speculated,
But who you know best,
What are you made of?
Agreed it’s a difficult life,
Agreed it’s an unfair game,
But tell me honestly,
What are you made of?
If you don’t know,
If you want to,
Ask me and I’ll tell you
What are you made of.
Everything that makes me is
Everything that makes you,
Although different, nevertheless same.
That’s what you are made of.
All body, mind, soul,
All emotions whole,
A reflection of me in you,
That’s what you are made of.
Beautiful!
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Jerry. 🙂
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My pleasure Mia 🤗
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🤗
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This is fantastic 🙂
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Thank you so much for your encouragement, Dave! 🙂
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This is so precious, what it brings to my mind is that those of us who struggle with self-love should recognise our connectedness and shared humanity with others, and see that the love we believe they deserve is also ours by right. Thank you for this!
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Thank you so much for stopping by to comment, appreciate & share your thoughts on the topic, Martina! 🙂 The pleasure is mine to especially read your beautiful lines about self-love.
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Bravo, Mia! 👏🏻 Your poem is many elements beautifully blended. I loved it!
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Thank you so much, dear Michele for your support! 🤗
I’m glad you found it beautiful.
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You’re very welcome, Mia. Happy to be here, enjoying your work. 🤗
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Lovely message
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Thanks a ton for appreciating, Mary! 🙂
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A poem borne out of intense experiences and keen perception, it show us that we live blindly on the surface and searching for a new path to choose.
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Thank you so much for your lovely words of encouragement, Michael! 🙂
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Yes, agree that all made up of the same thing, the hardware part is same for all, its only the software in us that creates the difference.. LoL And sometimes, the virus in one makes him a demon…. Thanks.
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Nice analogy, Jetendra. Going by it, why not use an anti-virus & clean up that system, so that it can run as new again?
Thank you so much for stopping by to share. 🙂
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same delicious cookie as always only now and then I like to change the ingredients
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Haha! Good one. 👍
Thank you so much for stopping by to comment, Cookie! 🙂
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Nice 👌
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Thanks a lot for supporting, Satyam! 🙂
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Woww.. this is my favorite question who am I truly
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Glad you could relate to it! Thank you so much for stopping by to share. 🙂 In between, can I please have your name?
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Hi Mia, I am Rashmi from India 😀
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Hi Rashmi & thanks a lot for your support! 🌸
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I love your work Mia and because of that I’d love you to consider amending your title. For as long as you affirm you’re struggling life will be a struggle. So perhaps ponder working with e.g. creativity the struggle, or writing through struggle, embracing the struggles of writing, et al., you will know deep within if or when it’s time to give way to the struggle and glow both inwardly and outwardly.
NB apologies in advance if this advice feels as if (a) it was never sort and (b) is unwelcome. For; that was my intention, either way enough your creative struggles 🙏
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Firstly, thank you so much for appreciating my work, Fin! 🙂
Secondly, it’s rather sweet of you to have taken time out to think for alternate titles for me. And I thank you for it. 🤗 It just shows that you are someone who cares enough to wish the best for anyone or anything that moves you. So no need to apologise.
Do visit my “About” page to know why I gave my blog this title. It’s something I owe myself. So I’ll be sticking with it as of now, till I become “published.” 🙂
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Dear Soul I get that, so simply ponder this not “till I become published” you’re already published so internally awaken each morning with the thought and sense of gratitude “wow I’m a published author thank you” and before you go to sleep say “I’m so grateful to be a published author thank you” thereafter the universe will truly know what to bring forward because you’re effectively stating what is. In the interim be well published author 🙏
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Well, I have heard of that technique before. With you really making all this effort, so could I for myself, right? Will give it a try. Thanks. 🙏
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Wonderful that’s a profound metanoia Mia great soul and award winning published author. For we all of us are what we think so think love and think big for you are exponential potential coming to know who you truly are and what you’re truly worth.🙏
Now I will dissolve and allow the wonders of the universe to unfold. Nevertheless in the moment of true and pure realisation take a breath, raise a smile and say a little pray in joy for the weary old man who took the time to inspire you to know that you’re so much greater than you could ever at this moment know.
It’s all energy all of it work in progress embracing the golden rule. Be well always dear soul 🙏
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Good things are coming your way, Fin. God bless. 🙏🙂
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Absolutely beautiful
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Thank you so much for your appreciation! 🙂
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wow. This is amazing!!
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Star. 🙂
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Yes, of course! And thank you for liking my posts!
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Glad we agree, Alan. My pleasure. 🌸
Thank you, indeed, for stopping by to comment. 🙂
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Good poem – requires some self-reflection.
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Wilson. 🙂
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🙏🙏🙏
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Thank you so much for stopping by to comment. 🙂
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Beautiful
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Thanks a lot for appreciating, Nora. 🙂
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