I see you,
Thinking and over-thinking,
Caring too much
About every little detail.
Yes, it’s important.
But when you stop
Once in a long while
And just smile,
You’re just beautiful.
I hear you,
Go on and on endlessly,
Voicing your heart
As well as that big brain.
Yes, it’s needed.
But when you take a breath
Once in a long while
And just smile,
You’re just beautiful.
I feel you,
Where you’re coming from,
Where you want to be going
With every step you take.
Yes, it’s worthwhile.
But when you freeze time
Once in a long while
And just smile,
You’re just beautiful.
The world will be fine
Because of the likes of you,
The efforts you put in,
The sacrifices you make.
Yes, it’s inevitable.
But for the likes of me
Who love you dearly,
Every once in a while, smile,
So our world turns beautiful.
Such a wonderful poem!!!
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Thank you so much for your praise, Luisa! 🙂
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You’re very welcome 🌹
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a smile opens all the doors of life. My hug, Mia.
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It does, indeed!
Thanks a lot for supporting, Fernando! 🙂 🤗
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Embracing love ❤️
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Yes! Thank you so much for your comment, Adarsh! 🙂
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It’s really a wonderful art of writing 💞
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🙂
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Loved it
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Dear Mia,
For some reason, your lovely poem invites me to reminisce Charlie Chaplin’s song “Smile”.
Thank you for your positive messages conveyed in your poetry.
Yours sincerely,
SoundEagle
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Thank you for your appreciation, Sound Eagle. 🙂
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this beautiful mantra I will promise to repeat to myself everyday
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Aww! That’s so sweet, Cookie! 🤗 I’m so glad you like it so!
Thank you so much for this beautiful response! 🙂
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This is what it’s like to truly appreciate someone. Super relatable. I have a feeling you will be an author I remember. Great work!
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Glad you could relate to it, Katie!
Your feeling makes me very happy!! Thank you so much for your appreciation! 🤗🙂
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A truly lyric poem, giving us a universal insight into the experience of the soul.
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So happy you think so, Michael!
Thanks a ton for your beautiful words! 😊
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Your writing keeps on getting better. I look forward to your posts.
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Thank you so much for your encouragement, David! I look forward to not disappointing you! 🤗
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Your writing always makes me smile! ❤️
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Now that’s a huge compliment! Thank you so much for that, Martina!! ❤️🤗
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Yeah…the smiling is needed to the whole world for welcoming by our hearts.much lovely poem.I think in such way.I appreciate your thoughts about of heartily smiling and and spreading the love in the whole world,dear Mia!!🌈🌹🙏🌹🌈
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Nice to know we agree on this, Aruna!
Thank you so much for your appreciation! 🙂
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For the inner and out side peace and love-now a days,smiling face is most important.most welcome,Dear Mia.🌹😊🌹
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Such a beautiful poem. Spoken from the heart, heard by the heart.
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Glad you really like it. Thank you so much for your appreciation, Ayush! 🙂
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Beautiful piece
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Noah! 🙂
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👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻💖💖💐💐
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Thank you so much, Bilgenus! 🙂
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♥️♥️♥️
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Thanks a lot, Martha. 🙂
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Absolutely wonderful poem
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Thank you so much for appreciating, Lynn! 🙂
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Beautiful
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Dariush! 🙂
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a terrific and moving piece; beautifully structured —
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Thank you so much for your praise, John! 😊
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So beautiful poetry 💹
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Thank you so much for your encouragement, Birendra! 🙂
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What a lovely read of this beautiful poem ….
Smiling and truly appreciate it
♥️♥️♥️
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So happy that you really like it, Roksana!
Thank you so much for your encouragement! 🙂
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My absolute pleasure ♥️♥️♥️
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Enjoyed poem – passionate and real!
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Thanks a lot for your encouragement, Wilson. 🙂
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🙌🏼
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Thanks for commenting. 🙌🏻
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Yes I am beautiful 😀
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Thanks for commenting, Aana. 🙂
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wow..this is so beautiful
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Thank you so much for your appreciation. 🙂
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soo beautiful
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Chaand. 🙂
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Beautiful poem….loved it ❣️
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Thank you so much for your encouragement, Rathna. 🙂
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❤
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Thanks a lot. 🙂
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of course, Mia!
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Beautiful 🙂
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, T! 🙂
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My pleasure. 💫
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Beautiful. Poem lines 😊
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Thank you so much for your kind words, Bharathi. 😊
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What a poem, such a beauty
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Thank you so much for your appreciation. 🙂
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Very beautiful ☺️
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Thanks a ton for appreciating, Nubela! 🙂
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Brings tears in my eyes. It really feels relatable Mia. Thank you for such a beautiful poem.
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I feel humbled by your response, Angel. The pleasure is all mine! 🤗
Indeed, thank you so much for your kind words. 😊
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What a lovely poem! I’m glad I found it…it made me smile
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, JJ! The pleasure is all mine to make you smile. 😊
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Beautiful poem
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Thanks a lot for appreciating, Madhumanti. 🙂
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So wonderful to feel that way, and beautifully said!
Thank you for liking my poem!
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Thanks a ton for your appreciation, Alan! 🙂
My pleasure.
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Ohhhh.. gorgeous… touching.. love this!
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Kimberly! 🙂
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