He waited for days,
Which turned into weeks,
Which turned into months
For inspiration to hit.
But alas, the muses
Were not favourable to him,
Were not ready to give him
Anything worthy at all.
So he decided
To wait some more,
To search further still,
With all his soul.
Finally, he saw her.
She was the answer.
She was the question.
Surprisingly, she was everything.
One fine day,
His heart was broken.
His beloved became
Someone else’s wife.
Even when her body shifted away,
Something of her was left behind,
Something unexpected
With him.
She became his muse,
For all seasons,
For till he lived,
He just had to recall her.
I love this. the artist will cling to something, always.
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The artist in you recognises that, Cookie!
Thank you so much for your appreciation, dear. ๐
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Beautifully poetry Mia ๐ท๐ค Loveโs lingering echo becomes artโyour poem captures how heartbreak can birth the purest muse. Painfully beautiful.
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I’m glad you found it so, Srikanth. ๐ค๐ผ
Thank you so much for your encouragement & take on it. ๐
I look forward to the same for my book too.
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Sometimes it’s the broken heart that becomes a source of creation. And often the pain remains in the past. And makes room for the new. Hugs, Mia.
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Sometimes, it is indeed true.
Thank you so much for stopping by to share & support, Fernando. ๐ค
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Beautiful poem she was his love or attraction well shared ๐
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Thank you so much for appreciating, Priti. ๐
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Welcome ๐ Hi subscribe to my YouTube channel if you don’t have any problems ๐ thank you ๐๐ผ.https://youtube.com/@pritilatanandi2010?si=lTeCkxllxUiWP2SU
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How is your book doing โบ๏ธ?
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It is my first book, so it is moving slowly but steadily ahead. Thanks for asking. ๐
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My best wishes ๐ค๐ผ keep going on ๐๐ผ
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This poem touches on a classic and eternal theme: the muse as impossible love. But it does so with a modern, sober and sincere voice. It reminds us that sometimes the most fertile beauty for art is born of emptiness, of unfulfilled longing, of what was not but left its mark.
Sincere hugs from afar.
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Thank you so much for understanding the emotion behind the poem & expressing it in support, Lincol. ๐
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This is kind of heartbreaking that is relatable to some. We can welcome love always.
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Yes, it is. Thank you so much for stopping by to comment & support, Hazel. ๐
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It’s my pleasure, Mia. Happy weekend!
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Same to you, Hazel. ๐
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Commended
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Thanks a lot. ๐
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Sweeeeet โค๏ธ
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Thanks a lot for encouraging, Tamara! ๐
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Beautiful poem ๐
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Thank you so much for your encouragement, PK. ๐
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God bless you ๐
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Thanks!
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Lovely and beautiful poem. ๐
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Thank you so much for your encouragement, Ashish. ๐
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