That’s the hope! And also a very sweet one at that! πΈ
In between, like all my written pieces, this too is a work of fiction.
Also, thank you so much, Zfthrimej for stopping by to share your wonderful words here. π
Mia, I am very impressed with how you are in this excellent haiku addressed the complex relationship between external pain and internal suffering. It raises questions about forgiveness, self-esteem, and the challenges of letting go. You’re addressing emotions here that range from grief and anger to a deep sense of loneliness and despair. The poem invited me to reflect on the effects of injuries β both external and internal β and the importance of finding ways to heal.
I’m very happy to receive this heartfelt response of appreciation from you about my short story, Rosie! Thank you so much! π
Yes, healing is the key here and allowing oneself to heal at that. It is a time – taking process but where there is a will, there is a way.
Hoping she’s healed and learned from the times she got hurt and that she’s stronger and smarter than before.
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That’s the hope! And also a very sweet one at that! πΈ
In between, like all my written pieces, this too is a work of fiction.
Also, thank you so much, Zfthrimej for stopping by to share your wonderful words here. π
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Sometimes, some people are very unkind and we’re better off without them. I hope that she’s in a much better place now. π
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True.
Don’t worry, Shweta. It’s a work of fiction. πΈ
Also, thank you so much for stopping by to share. π
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Glad to hear that, Miam. My pleasure π
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it’s so hard to let go, right, but holding on hurts worse. beautiful writing, Mia. x
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You get it on point again, Cookie! πΈ
Thanks a ton for your appreciation! π€
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In essence, it reflects an internal struggle between the desire to protect oneself from further pain and the reality that suffering can be recurring.
Greetings.
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Yeah, kind of. Better to let go. π
Thank you so much for your time to comment, Lincol. π
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OMG.A confession for other’s fault.An unique poem.love thisβ€οΈπβ€οΈ
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Thanks a lot for your support, Aruna. π
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Most welcome,dearπππ
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Mia, I am very impressed with how you are in this excellent haiku addressed the complex relationship between external pain and internal suffering. It raises questions about forgiveness, self-esteem, and the challenges of letting go. You’re addressing emotions here that range from grief and anger to a deep sense of loneliness and despair. The poem invited me to reflect on the effects of injuries β both external and internal β and the importance of finding ways to heal.
Thank you for your words.
Rosie from Germany
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I’m very happy to receive this heartfelt response of appreciation from you about my short story, Rosie! Thank you so much! π
Yes, healing is the key here and allowing oneself to heal at that. It is a time – taking process but where there is a will, there is a way.
The pleasure is all mine. π€
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