I stare out of my window
To watch the rain falling down,
Rhythmically, almost musically,
Without any urgency,
On the lush greenery,
As I munch on a packet of chips,
Savoring their taste,
Without any urgency,
Without a care in the world,
Thinking, “This is the life.”
Of course, I have many a care,
Real-life things so big,
That if I start counting,
I wonβt be able to even see the rain.
So even if this life is not yet ideal,
For few moments,
I choose
To enjoy myself.
I choose to actually feel,
“This is the life.”
Mia, what a sweet, sensitive poem. I often find myself catching little melodies in the rain.
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Cookie. π
Good to know.
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live life every moment with joy and lightness. sometimes, forgetting everything around us for a moment is good. I really liked the poetry, Mia. my hug.
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Thank you so much for your kind words of wisdom and encouragement, Fernando! ππ€
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We are blessed with moments like this if we only pause to look and see.
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Very true, Priscilla! Glad we agree. Thank you for commenting. π
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And I love your poem!
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Priscilla. π
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This poem reminds us that life isn’t always perfect, but we can always choose to pause, savor a moment, and recognize its value. That choiceβmaking space for calm, for small beautyβis what turns an ordinary moment into a fulfilling one.
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Glad we agree. Thanks a lot for commenting, Lincol. π
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I enjoy watching rain, too, sometimes when I chose to slow down. Beautiful reflection, Mia
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Thank you so much for sharing your take & appreciating, Hazel. π
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My pleasure, Mia. Enjoy your day!
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Thanks & same to you.
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I love the rain. Your poem resonates with my nostalgia during rain- sounds, scents, and all my other senses. π§οΈ
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Glad to know we have a similar liking, Tamara! Also, thank you so much for your encouragement. π
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Exactly what we feel becomes a part of life π«Άπ»
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True! Thank you so much for stopping by to comment, Aparna. π
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It was an awesome read
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Thank you so much for your encouragement! π
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Positive thoughts! Excellent!
Enjoy and savor every particle of those chips!
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Yes, I will savor it!
Thank you so much for your appreciation! π
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Astrological noir
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Thanks for stopping by.
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il dolce far niente!
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Yup! Thanks a lot for stopping by to comment, Graham! π
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Sweet poem! I love the way you are describing setting your mind on the moment and enjoying what nature has to offer!
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Jody! π
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Beautiful poem. Everyone needs to feel the life πͺπΌ well shared
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Thanks a ton for your kind words, Priti. π
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Welcome π€
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