He came with the rain,
Unexpected
As on a clear sky day,
Uninvited
As without an umbrella,
Unabashed
As with the torrential pour.
Soon thereafter,
Changed the weather
Around and within me,
Changed the rhythm
Of things and life,
Changed so much
In so short a time.
Then the rain stopped.
With the rain who came
Had to go too.
With nature’s call,
He had to compel to.
With an abrupt stop,
The story ended.
Sometimes I wonder
Why did it have to rain
So hard sometimes,
Why can’t it always
Be clear skies above,
Why did the rain bring
Him along to take away.
Nevertheless,
For that rain,
I’m grateful.
For that spell of happiness,
I’m grateful.
For after all,
He came with the rain.
Wow this is beautiful!
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, CJ! 🙂
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Delighted to see a post by you, Mia! Wonderful poem. 👏🏻
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Thank you so much for your delightful response, Michele! 😊
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You’re welcome! Wishing you a wonderful weekend. 🌞
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Thanks & same to you, Michele! 🙂
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🙏🏻🌻🕊️
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Just really beautiful.
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I’m glad you enjoyed it, Cindy! Thanks a ton for appreciating. 😊
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Impressively composed; recorded experience of various perceptions and emotions, thoughts, expressed in their emotional context as part of an experience.
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Thank you so much for your kind words, Michael! 😊
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Beautiful poem! Rain brought that unexpected happiness 😊 well shared
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Thanks a lot for appreciating, Priti. 🙂
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Glad you’re back 😎
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Haha! Really glad to read that, Chris! Thank you so much for stopping by. 🤗
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You’re welcome and have a marvellous day 🌞
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Wish you the same, Chris. 🙂
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Beautiful verses. After all, his company in the middle of the rain was a new beginning.
Nice to read you. 😊🤗
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Thank you so much for your encouragement, Lincol. 😊🤗
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🤗🤗
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So well articulated. You have deeply expressed.
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Thank you so much for your appreciation & welcome to my blog! 🙂
In between, may I know your name?
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Enjoyed the expression of emotions in this poem!
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Glad to know that! Thank you so much for your appreciation, Wilson! 🙂
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You’re welcome!
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Love
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Thanks a lot for appreciating! 🙂
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Dang, this is fantastic 👏👏👏👏
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Haha! Thank you so much for your encouraging response, Bree! 😊
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Lovely poem and love the extended metaphor! 😊
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Jeiyanni! 🙂
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a lovely poem beautifully melancholic
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Glad you found it so! Thank you so much for stopping by to respond well! 🙂
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that is such a lovely poem
I loved it mia
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Good to know. Thank you so much for your appreciation, Kamika! 🙂
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Beautiful poem! Love came with the rain 🌧️ I also love rain 😀
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Thanks a ton for the appreciation, Priti! 🙂
Good to know! 🤗
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Beautiful 🩵💟💕
Happy and blessed Sunday 🌸💮
Greetings 👋🇪🇦
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Thanks a ton for your encouragement, PK! 🙂
Wish you the same! 😊
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Lovely …”he came with the rain” beautiful.
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Kritika! 🙂
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I seldom read poems more than once through at a time….this I read three times one after the other, enjoyed how the rhythm tasted
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That is quite a compliment, Lewis! I feel really happy to receive it. 🤗
Thank you so much for being so gregarious with your encouraging words for me! 😊😊
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A lovely poem…❣️✍️❣️
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Glad you think so, Aruna! Thank you so much for your support! 🙂
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Most welcome with warmth of my heart❣️🙏❣️
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